helenelizabethclarke

every year, lives are lost hearts are broken, but for what cost? a disagreement? one person's need? colour of skin, religion or creed? triggers are pulled, knives are drawn, we're ...

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...dont like alien stories, don't be put off, it isnt like the typical alien, sci-fi stories, i promise!! Here is a scene from my story. Its an alien meets human ...

1. Partition My father drove me to Richard’s house on a cold, November evening. The heating in his car was broken, so we sat shivering, neither one of us attempting ...

“Henry?” I asked tentatively as he perched himself awkwardly on the chair next to the bed. “Yeah?” “Why aren’t you hurt?” He looked up at me, his eyes full of ...

I trace the petals with adoration, and pray that this beauty will never cease. But when I hope that such splendor, such glory will never expire, from beneath my trembling ...

i dont write that much fiction really, i tend to write poetry more. Here is an attempt of mine, just a section from a story i'm writing.i would appreciate constructive ...

This is a section from a story i'm writing at the moment. It might not make sense because you dont know the full story and they always say DONT TELL ...

ENJOY AND CONSTRUCTIVELY CRITICISE LOVE YOU ALL xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx They all expect you to be the grieving daughter, I told myself. Just act like it fo

topic description continued...IF YOU'VE READ MY FIRST CHAPTER AND DONT WANT TO read something that's a bit later on in my story, then don't read this! This is just a ...

“Go on then,” Rob puffed up his chest arrogantly and cleared his throat, “fucking shoot me!” Indigo’s finger wavered on the trigger and a surge of terror pounded through me. ...

This is just a short section from my story Constructive criticism please, it's sort of draft so i expect lots xx-Helen x THIS IS BEATRICE'S PERSPECTIVE I’d never worked it ...

Hitchin up her dress of lace, Lipstick blood smeared on her face. Hair like straw, backcombed to shit, Black eye, swelled, like she took some hit. Staggerin, oh staggerin, like ...

not sure really if this is lyrics or poetry? anyway, constructively criticise please x I’ve got my own opinions, But aint a get around girl, Don’t want to spread myself ...

You might've noticed i'm posting lots of lyrics recently.It's just i'm making some beats on the computer, and when i pluck up the courage i might record my lyrics in ...

I recently visited Auschwitz on a school trip and I wrote two pieces when I got back, one was a poem and the other was this. I'm still not sure ...

William At the back of the theatre, there is a small room. It is the type of room that would never quite be large enough to walk around in. It ...

Here's the beginning of the new story i'm writing.What I want to know mainly is what you think of my protagonist? Is she strong enough so far, how can I ...

Just a little poem I wrote earlier. Any suggestions are welcome but I just wanted to share with you...She asked for my star sign,Winced when I said Aries.Why am I ...