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I really like this story, it sounded true, not something you made up. I liked the 'like' inbeetween the sentences; it sounded more like someone was talking to you not ...

Hee hee this made me laugh, this is a very good poem in my ohpinion. I unterstand its point and the ryhming and rythem were great :-) I'm going to ...

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! VERY FUNNY! *wipes tears of laughter* the first line was good but the rest was off rythum and it didn't seem poem like, I didn't really unterstand th

I love this!, is this sopposed ot be before the other one you wrote? or visa versa? anyway you have really good imagry in this, you can clearly see everything ...

What do you mean this isn't your best work? this is beutiful, very good imagry. These few lines here are very good: "An oasis of hope for a thirsty soul. ...

I really like this but I think it would be better if you wrote it like this: "It cannot be this way But it must On this earth you and ...

I can see why you called it Abstract :-) Anyway I really enjoyed reading this poem, it was a little choppy though, like here: "Wearing the jacket around my slender ...

What!!??? this is great!!! and so are allllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll of your other poems you write!!! I don't see why you think your bad because your NOT! :-)

O.K, this is so confusing. I liked the beginning but it just was way to confusing at the middle and end. I like the plot, well I really don't know ...

This is a very confusing poem, I unterstood it a little, very little. Her mind lifted, It had just traveled to the soles of her feet But now it had ...

I really like this poem, I disagree with the people who say thu unoringinal. (well mabye it is, I haven't read THAT many poems) This stanza is my favorite, it's ...

I like it, the last line wraps it up quite nicely. She jumps, the cold rousing her from her dreams and as she sits the world turns black she turns ...

Wow :shock: this is great, and your right, your out of your writers block!!! I love your imagry. My fingers are bleeding, small, scarlet drips that fall onto the paper ...

Hmmm, I sort of liked it, but it was missing something very big. And I was expecting soemthing much bigger at the end. You should put something more there insted ...

Oh, I absolutly adored it. Very descriptive, beutiful. But for some critiqe. The first stanza Do you remember when we used to play limbs intertwined one person two heads? I ...