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hayley10019

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: F*** You Inspiration

    I don't mean this in an offensive way towards anyone else, but screw what they say. I found the poem funny, and exactly how a writers feels when they've got ...

    Dec 29, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Burning Soul - Chapter 1

    Ello! The first Chapter and I'm already really drawn in! I'm ready to read the rest so please, please continue! And also, if you'd please somehow possibly send me each ...

    Dec 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Cynthia's Story

    I liked it, at first I was confused on the meaning of the poem and what it was written for, but once at the end most of it was clear. ...

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: On Your Knees

    This was defiantly a really happy love-y poem and it was really cute. It wasn't too sappy, but sappy enough to get the point across that it was this cute ...

    Jul 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Head, Heart, and Soul

    I really liked it. I like the first stanza, how you connected a secret path to your soul. Maybe suggesting that no one really can get there. I liked it ...

    Jul 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Give pain, then take it again.

    Wow. I really liked it. It was dark, but lovely! So much emotion tumbled out of the poem! Dark emotion! And it was lovely! I really liked it. How your ...

    Jul 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: End? Never... <3

    I thought it was really cute but it's the numbers that got me.. But still, I liked it. I thought it was really cute.. but very sappy. Anyway, I thought ...

    Jul 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Where Is My Mind?

    I really liked this. I thought it was beautiful and wonderfully written. I liked the stanzas.. the story.. the.. Everything about this poem was good. I have nothing to complain ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Shadows of Depression

    I really liked it. It was dark, and intense and.. Just riveting! It was a good poem and I liked the "play by play" action each stanza. Depression sucks doesn't ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Do You Know Me?

    I really liked this poem. It was riveting. Taking you on a ride of questions that most cannot answer. And that's the point right? Showing the reader...following the footsteps of ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Twist of fate

    I really liked this poem. It was very dramatic and nice.. But I felt it was a little long. I think it should be in more of the dramatic poetry ...

    Jul 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Maybe, I'm a Pencil

    It was a good first poem! I liked your referances to pens and.. office supplies. It was cute and sweet. Although, I'm not sure about the ending? Maybe it's just ...

    Jul 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Time dances in our shadow

    I liked it a lot! I thought it was cute! But the last line.. doesn't really work. You need more of a story to make an abrupt ending such as ...

    Jul 22, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Dear Mr. Rapist

    Oh my God! While reading my heart was racing! I felt terrible! Terrible for the girl but I also felt how she could move on. How she could move on ...

    Jul 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: No longer a poem!

    This poem was beautiful and honestly something everyone can connect to. I liked the poem, the length and the connection to the windows and the eyes, the blind.. the.. The ...

    Jul 22, 2011


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