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Ah, the good old days... This poem was pretty good! I do have a few nitpicks though: But, being formal in conversation, "Formal" doesn't sound right to me. "Polite" sounds ...

Heya! Saw this and I was like "Hm. A poem about the Joker, the Clown Prince of Crime, one of my favorite villains of all time (rhyme not intended)," so ...

An interesting look into the human mind! I overall enjoyed this. I don't have much to say about this piece. These are also nitpicks: I saw them all crowd around ...

Heya! This story makes me think of the game series Bayonetta whenever I these angels are mentioned. The city name Angelus also reminds me of the anime Sora no Otoshimono ...

Hey, Donizback! Quite the interesting piece you have here! Initially, I was going to critique you on your tone, as it seemed too light for the subject, a person is ...

Hey there! So this is supposed to be about a girl who falls in love with a bully and is conflicted by it. This is a really interesting way to ...

Hi! when the sun and moon were our friends I understand that you're trying to say that we used to imagine as children, so the first stanza makes sense, save ...

Ooh an anime-inspired work *pounces on it.* Seeing that this was categorized under humor, and after reading it, I'm beginning to think that this work is a satire/parody of something ...

Wow... You hooked me into the scene almost immediately and kept me reading throughout. The mood was perfect, the writing vivid, and you got Shikamaru's character spot-on. There was only ...

A cross between DOOM, and QUAKE? Two of the best FPS's out there? I've gotta read this! And I did. And I could barely see what was going on. In ...

Yo! First few lines got me thinking, "does this have the same melody of Mulan's 'Be a Man?'" So at first, I hummed the words to that tune in my ...

I'd like to thank you for the review yesterday, as well as return the favor. But before that, what a coincidence! Just wrote a poem inspired by a song yesterday. ...

And this is why you wear a condom... Jokes aside, this poem was well written. Took me a while to understand the message though, and I don't know if I ...

Alright! A new series from you! This reminded me of the Chuunin exams. You used that as inspiration, didn't you? Story-wise, it's interesting. I want to know more about this ...

Hey iamdesi! Unlike IceWinifredd, I liked getting to know about the character. To me, her ramblings were better than the actual story. You managed to make your main character likeable, ...