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Hi!!! the piece has been Written very nicely... My favorite part was when The narrator and his mother decline help from the dad...Because that's what he deserved!!! I really liked ...

Even if you hadn't threatened my nature... I would have replied...because I liked it a lot...!!! it indeed is very nice. What I really loved was that you have shown ...

hey.. Its very nice poem and the title is good too... I did love the repetition of emphasized the importance of the day "tomorrow"... Hope you write more and more ...

hey there... Its a nicely written poem.... Very nicely indeed...Though I understand the reason for using the F word so much, I believe decreased use would have been better... But ...

hey there.... Its a very nice poem.... Im not surprised you like it!!! I know you want criticism but the thing is im really small and can't make out mistakes...just ...

hey.... I really liked your was nice...first of its kind that I have read... the flow did break at a few points and needs slight improvement...but it will do without ...

oh god...!!! this so much like something i am feeling!!! I can totally relate!!! Even I have dear friend I have said a thousand sorries to but she won't listen..... ...

its a good story....I really enjoyed reading through it....I hope you will soon put up the sequel...because im dying to read it...the depth of emotions has been written wonderfully...I couldn't ...

well...its been written very beautifully.... the details you have captured are very deep and nice... The ending was not what i expected it was surprising and shocking....But it was a ...

this is a very sweet poem...alredy on the topic im partial too.....I thing i realized through your poem was that "Love never dies". this statement has been spoken over and ...

it was so nice...i love the way you have captured the hurt and the pain....I mean by reading the poem itself I could make out the extent of hurt and ...

one thing......I firstly loved your poem....its very nice.... I know how it feels when life is upside down...and suicide seems to be the only friend has also attempted but God ...

a first attempt...its a very good poem indeed.... *applause*!! thats what i do for every poems only...even my dear friends...well i love the way you have attempted to capture every ...

I read the poem and thought...."W-O-W"!!!! its brilliant...!! and i car completely relate to it!!!! I can understand the extent of pain experiences like these cause....and i hope it came ...

awww...thats a really very ssweet poem...the line i loved the most was "Your face, darling--it's my sunshine." It is really very sweet..... thinking of whomever you have written this very ...