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Re: Noses
This is cute! :D I think this is very creative and really cool!
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: Wicked the Musical
I LOVE that musical! The singing was amazing and I loved the idea about how the witch wasn't REALLY a bad person! It just blew me away! XD
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: Peeled Naked
Nice! I loved your description and wording. It was a bit confusing at first but now I sort of understand what it is. I really liked this! :)
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: Love's Song
This is extremely good! All I can say is make a couple stanzas, space it out a bit because the lines are clumped together. I really like this! :D
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Freckles
Aww that's cute. Personally, I do have freckles and if someone wrote this to me, I'd be flattered. Good job! :D
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: The curse of Medusa
Interesting description. I actually kinda of liked it. You're pretty good, impressive!
May 28, 2011 -
Re: flip-curl literature
Great job! I really really liked this!!
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Pool Shark chapt. 1
She was a southern girl and that's why it was hard to read XD also I don't know if there's anything else that needs to be fixed, I think it's ...
May 26, 2011 -
Re: Drained chapt. 5
My bad, it wouldn't be either.
May 21, 2011 -
Re: love?
Check the first stanza you got kinda of an error lol. Other than that, good! :)
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Fireworks
Wow lol. It's very good, not my type but I actually really liked it :D I didn't expect too.....I'm proud of you ^~^.
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Bitter Regret
Very nice! I really really liked it! :) I am jealous!!
May 17, 2011 -
Re: A Deadly Promise
Pretty good, though it's kind of straight forward of what' happening. That's just my opinion though but I might be jealous because it's so good! :)
May 17, 2011 -
Re: 0
This is exactly how it feels like to have a broken heart. It like literally hurts....good job.... :)
May 14, 2011 -
Re: Mask
I like it :)
May 14, 2011