halogirl4197

This is cute! :D I think this is very creative and really cool!

I LOVE that musical! The singing was amazing and I loved the idea about how the witch wasn't REALLY a bad person! It just blew me away! XD

Nice! I loved your description and wording. It was a bit confusing at first but now I sort of understand what it is. I really liked this! :)

This is extremely good! All I can say is make a couple stanzas, space it out a bit because the lines are clumped together. I really like this! :D

Aww that's cute. Personally, I do have freckles and if someone wrote this to me, I'd be flattered. Good job! :D

Interesting description. I actually kinda of liked it. You're pretty good, impressive!

Great job! I really really liked this!!

She was a southern girl and that's why it was hard to read XD also I don't know if there's anything else that needs to be fixed, I think it's ...

My bad, it wouldn't be either.

Check the first stanza you got kinda of an error lol. Other than that, good! :)

Wow lol. It's very good, not my type but I actually really liked it :D I didn't expect too.....I'm proud of you ^~^.

Very nice! I really really liked it! :) I am jealous!!

Pretty good, though it's kind of straight forward of what' happening. That's just my opinion though but I might be jealous because it's so good! :)

This is exactly how it feels like to have a broken heart. It like literally hurts....good job.... :)

I like it :)