halogirl4197

At first (in my opinion), I thought it was going to be a happy and exciting poem about how some kid got hurt and enjoyed getting patched up. Now I ...

I really liked this poem. I personally do NOT stereotype and/or criticize people for how they look or act in public. Many teens who wear a bunch of make up ...

It's an alright poem. I adored your description and flow but it was very short. Maybe, describe why he/she loves him/her. Not just their looks. MAKE IT LONGA! :D

Hi! I'm here to review! :D It's an okay poem. You should be more creative with your rhyming and branch out to different words. It doesn't need to end the ...

Hi! :D I'm here to review! It's very confusing up until the last paragraph. It was like babbling about something but I had no idea what at first. The part ...

Pretty cool! It's quite a short song O.O but I think it's good. The chorus has an okay rhythm but could be better :). Other then that, good rhyming and ...

It's alright. It seems more like children's poem :D which is good! Fix the first stanza. It's A A A A and the rest is A A B B. Other ...

I really enjoyed this :D. At first when I saw it, I was like "ugh, a long poem but then I started to get into it and read :D. Lol. ...

This is great! This is exactly how I feel when I can get NO ideas! :D AWESOME AS ALWAYS! :D

Hello! I'm here to review! First, the beginning is......not the best. In many stories, people don't directly talk to the reader unless it's a journal. I think the story would ...

Hello! :D I'm here to review. It was an alright poem, but I got some advice for you! First, the stanzas don't have the same length of lines. It kind ...

I actually really like this. One of my favorite movies is Ariel and that's how this interested me. Many people make mermaids look kind of "little kiddy", meaning kind of ...

This sounds more like a song to me than a poem. I like your description but like I said, it's like a song. You repeat many of the words in ...

It was kind of boring to tell you the truth but that's just me. It was very dull from description and Mitchie is very......plain. Also, is that her real name? ...

I thought it was pretty good but is there a certain thing it's talking about? At first I thought it was love but now I don't think so. Overall, it ...