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Oooooooh, this is beautiful! Very very gorgeous. Mmmmm, lovely, I will read it again. Ooooooh, and again. Lovely. Mmmmmm. I really like the characterisation of the moon and the sun. ...

Hello! I know you've been here about a month, but I'll welcome you to YWS anyway! I see you've done lots of reviews. Well done! I am here to review ...

WELCOME TO YWS! I hope you enjoy your stay :D I am here to review your work. :D So, this is the start of a novel type thing set in ...

I see that you're new. Welcome! I hope you enjoy YWS and everything. This little piece got me quite interested. Is it going to be part of a longer novel, ...

OK, so. While I think that you have a decent plot (a young boy trying to find out where he's come from, etc.) I think it could definitely be expanded ...

Hellooooooo! Here is my review! :D I really like the first stanza. It got me quite interested in the rest of the poem. I don't really understand what sort of ...

"Rather, if the novel is a pond, you shuffle slowly into it, admiring the elegant composition of your surroundings and carefully testing the tone and temperature of the water." This ...

These are very beautiful. Slightly cheeky putting two things in one post, but I will forgive you, because they are very nice. Although, if you had put them separately then ...

This is very interesting. As the start of a novel, it definitely grips me. I think you've got a good style and what seems like a good plot going here, ...

Hellooooooo, I like this a lot. Your poems are always really rather good. Firstly, to get it out of the way, you missed an apostrophe on the second line. I ...

I love your avatar. I love it. I know that's not relevant but... Anyway, review. I thought it was very good and I liked the mystery to it and the ...

I read this a few days ago and thought it was brilliant. I read it just now and understood it a bit more. This is a really interesting piece; gripping ...

Interesting. I'd be interested to know what war this is- a futuristic one, what with them being in a car? You've got a few grammar mistakes; Line 1- Parents' car ...

This is really amazing! Truly incredible! I imagined from the start that it was just going to be about someone getting over someone, but then that was really interesting! It ...

Excellent. Flowed beautifully and left me going 'awwwwh'. If you've written this for someone you should definitely give it to them; it's so cute! I'd marry someone who wrote me ...