godlypopo

Hello, here is your review as requested. A cute, short poem! I like the idea of dancing clouds as it creates an interesting yet clear image in my head. However ...

A nice, although short, First chapter. You have the basic story line down, you just need to fill in those extra details to make it flow. I would suggest more ...

Hello, happy review day! A really, really beautiful poem with amazing grammar that rolls off the tongue as the story unfolds. I love how as soon as the poem gets ...

Hello, happy review day! I love how you go from comparing similar cases to a sliver of juxtaposition and then back to the similar cases. This hooks the reader and ...

Hello, happy review day! This was a very interesting chapter that kept me full on needed information throughout. The chapter is a nice, consistent read that is a sufficient length. ...

Hello, here to review your poem! Wow this is amazing. I love how the story keeps up and the rhyming seems extremely natural for the reader. The use of free ...

Hello, happy review day! I love this poem, you use beautiful imagery that compels the reader into running through each line with many thoughts that come rushing through. I see ...

Hello, happy review day! At first I really didn't get the overall message you were portraying but upon re-read, I suddenly realised that you were telling us that we should ...

Hello, happy review day. This was a very short poem. Whilst short it is comedic and effective. You take the long time many people slaughter into their poems and throw ...

Hello, happy review day! This was a beautiful poem. It is emotionally effective and drags the reader into a trance of pity as you used upsetting vocabulary which hits them ...

Hello, happy review day! (First of all I believe you need to age rate this XD) This was a very interesting 5 chapters(?) I really enjoyed reading it and didn't ...

Hello, happy review day! This was a very interesting chapter that kept me reading. You use really lovely and crisp descriptions which make the characters really memorable for the reader. ...

Hello, happy review day! This was a very interesting interpretation on the Christmas carol. My only suggestion is that you do not need to say most of the emotions. From ...

Hello, happy review day! Whilst kind of interesting, your story is a bit rushed. Slow down an take time to describe things; don't pack too much information into one paragraph ...

Hello, happy review day! To start with, I really didn't feel like the title is effective enough-it drags on and isn't very catchy for the reader. I would suggest chopping ...