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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Riddle

    I love this! I like how it is obvious yet difficult at the same time. I think that my favourite thing about this is that it's words and clues keep ...

    Nov 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Beautiful, Black, and Proud.

    Wow what a lovely poem. Your use of free verse emphasises your point and adds to the whole poem. I like how you repeat no as it really gets the ...

    Nov 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Gift

    Hullo Snazzy! I love how this poem is short, simple and readable. I like how it sticks the topic and has a nice flow. However I do feel like you ...

    Nov 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Haunted

    Hello! Wow I love this poem! I like how you describe each thing in detail, relating to different ideas which leaves an impact on the reader. I like how you ...

    Nov 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Dramatic Re: I Am Afraid To Sleep

    I love this! I find that it is a very reflective poem that shows a sense of beauty and curiosity. I like how you talk about this fantasy world inside ...

    Nov 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: deleted

    Hello! I love how you talk of a girl who is perfect who is extremely beautiful for it to then swirl into a pit of her dark side. I think ...

    Nov 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Happy Birthday YWS!

    Hello Unknown, Unlike a few readers I actually quite enjoyed this poem; there are some problems with it here and there but we will get to that later! First of ...

    Nov 4, 2014
  • Other » General, General Re: REDACTED

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    Nov 3, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Living Stories

    Overall this is a very interesting poem, I love how you talk of yourself as a book and then you go into explaining the ups and downs of it. 1st ...

    Oct 31, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: fort

    This is quite the memorable poem; it brings back memories of when I used to build forts at home. I like how you have used the repetition of the word ...

    Oct 31, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Don't Be Afraid

    That was really good, I like how you left me on the edge of my seat as I read each stanza. I think that you end the poem very well ...

    Oct 31, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Winter

    Hello! Wow I love this poem :D I like how it has an interesting hint of love that appears slowly. I like how you used words like us and our ...

    Oct 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Poems for entertainment

    Review on Cookies: This was a very nice and simple poem that made me want a cookie:p I like how it kept a steady pace throughout which gave it a ...

    Oct 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Fairytale

    An amazing poem, love the end! I love how you have a mood of hatred and mystery throughout the poem which keeps the reader on edge. I interpret this as ...

    Oct 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Science Fiction Re: "The Doctor"

    As a fellow Doctor Who fan I'd like to say well done for fitting everything about him in one poem. Structure: Throughout you have sustained a regular rhyming scheme of ...

    Oct 30, 2014


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