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Re: Riddle
I love this! I like how it is obvious yet difficult at the same time. I think that my favourite thing about this is that it's words and clues keep ...
Nov 14, 2014 -
Re: Beautiful, Black, and Proud.
Wow what a lovely poem. Your use of free verse emphasises your point and adds to the whole poem. I like how you repeat no as it really gets the ...
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Re: Gift
Hullo Snazzy! I love how this poem is short, simple and readable. I like how it sticks the topic and has a nice flow. However I do feel like you ...
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Re: Haunted
Hello! Wow I love this poem! I like how you describe each thing in detail, relating to different ideas which leaves an impact on the reader. I like how you ...
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Re: I Am Afraid To Sleep
I love this! I find that it is a very reflective poem that shows a sense of beauty and curiosity. I like how you talk about this fantasy world inside ...
Nov 9, 2014 -
Re: deleted
Hello! I love how you talk of a girl who is perfect who is extremely beautiful for it to then swirl into a pit of her dark side. I think ...
Nov 5, 2014 -
Re: Happy Birthday YWS!
Hello Unknown, Unlike a few readers I actually quite enjoyed this poem; there are some problems with it here and there but we will get to that later! First of ...
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Re: Living Stories
Overall this is a very interesting poem, I love how you talk of yourself as a book and then you go into explaining the ups and downs of it. 1st ...
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Re: fort
This is quite the memorable poem; it brings back memories of when I used to build forts at home. I like how you have used the repetition of the word ...
Oct 31, 2014 -
Re: Don't Be Afraid
That was really good, I like how you left me on the edge of my seat as I read each stanza. I think that you end the poem very well ...
Oct 31, 2014 -
Re: Winter
Hello! Wow I love this poem :D I like how it has an interesting hint of love that appears slowly. I like how you used words like us and our ...
Oct 30, 2014 -
Re: Poems for entertainment
Review on Cookies: This was a very nice and simple poem that made me want a cookie:p I like how it kept a steady pace throughout which gave it a ...
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Re: Fairytale
An amazing poem, love the end! I love how you have a mood of hatred and mystery throughout the poem which keeps the reader on edge. I interpret this as ...
Oct 30, 2014 -
Re: "The Doctor"
As a fellow Doctor Who fan I'd like to say well done for fitting everything about him in one poem. Structure: Throughout you have sustained a regular rhyming scheme of ...
Oct 30, 2014
