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Thanks for the review! I didn't really know what was unlocking the cage at the time. I kind of felt that there had to be a way to escape it ...

Thank you :)

Thanks. :)

Thanks! I'll work on it.

Thank you!

Thanks. With the lines where 'again' and 'chain' are the ending, it depends how you say 'again' as to whether it rhymes or not. I didn't think of this when ...

Thanks.

Sorry if any of that doesn't make sense... I'm really tired.

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That is beautiful.

Hi :) Well this is great. I have a strict mother myself, not to the extent of this piece but I can relate. I think it flows well and I ...

Thanks, that means a lot.

Thank you!!

There, fixed.

Thanks, that means a lot and I'll keep that in mind. Oh and I hadn't realised I wrote that, it's supposed to be 'at your face' oops :D