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Hi :) This was really good. First things first, nitpicks. There were grammatical and spelling mistakes but everyone gets them. I'll give you a couple but mainly just read over ...

Hi :) That was so simple yet so moving for me. The scroll/slider things (I don't know what they are called) added a nice touch. Adding something at the very ...

Hi :) This is awesome. It's really well written and very descriptive. I now want to know every other little detail I can about this, it's so captivating. I love ...

Hi :) Wow that's really good! There's just a part where it says: "Night and day.... Nome nights like these" I'm going to take a guess and say that instead ...

Hi :) This is awesome. Really well written and I can't really find anything wrong. I understand why you repeated those lines and I think that was a good idea. ...

Hi :) Sorry but there will be a blank comment from me. It was an accident. Anyway... This is great. I couldn't really relate because I've never thought of killing ...

Hi :) Considering this is your first poem it's awesome. Love it. It describes my best friend perfectly so I can easily relate. My one and only suggestion is to ...

Hi :) So that was awesome. Looked pretty much perfect. No mistakes or anything. The only suggestion I would make is probably to change: "start re-reading the letters in my ...

Hi :) Okay, that is really creepy. I had goose bumps! It's written perfectly. No mistakes (or just none I can find). I was relieved when the part came that ...

Hi :) This is great. It's a little long for my taste but I love the idea and can relate as it's what I want in the world. Also, I ...

Wow, this is amazing! It was really moving and sad, by the end I was nearly crying. It has been beautifully written and it was very descriptive. I think you ...

This is amazing! It has so much meaning and was very realistic, too. Some small punctuation errors but that's all I can say is wrong with this. This was really ...

At first I thought this was going to be boring (no offense) but as it goes on the message becomes strong and it's more entertaining. I think the first paragraph ...

First off, sorry but I didn't read it all. Some more paragraphs would make it easier to read. From what I read, it was pretty good. Although, this is too ...