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Hey.. A river of reviews are flowing.. First of all, it was scary. Personally, I don't like horror but the way you wrote it like damn good. There weren't many ...

Even it was a happy ending but still I felt that this poem is quite sad. Anyways, you have a great idea and quite a plot for a poem. Um... ...

Lastly, amatuer is spelled like this amateur. Hi, hi. No worry, I won't eat you and I am an amateur writer too. I hope we'll be friends. Anyway, about the ...

A river of review is flowing.... Hi, I think you(the persona) really desire all of the thing you wrote. Firstly, repetition words or phrases you used. Repetition words aren't bad ...

Hi. When I read this poem I felt I was in my classroom, teacher was teaching, I was sleeping, laying my head on the table. The teacher didn't angry with ...

Well, part of it made me wanted to be in solitude place for a moment. You made a conflicted poem. You could add somewhat a word that could describe the ...

Wow! What a story. It was making me to appreciate everything around especially the phrase 'his favorite book'. Do the phrase necessary? Hi...Hi... Anyway, quite a scene you made there. ...

Hi. Oh can I say that this is vivid. The way you describe it, amazing! If I read it loud here maybe I'll cry because sometimes I feel the poem ...

Hi... This story seem interesting at first but it tried to be a eerie and I thought it was scary. Well, you can hide the fact that Emily is a ...