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Re: Strewberries with Cream
Hmmmm this was beyond special! Your description of what you like about what used to be there in our world makes the reader flow along with your imagination. I guess ...
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: The drunken truth
Okay well, I liked this. You asked me to review one of your poems and here I am XD Umm I don't think this was completely frigid or emotionless, I ...
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: Top Ten Reasons Why Women Are Better Than Men!
Okaaaay, I looked at the website, and I read your article. Now I'm a realistic rational person and I really avoid discussing this subject... BUT I have to say: Men ...
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: Drift
I made a few changes to this poem. I uploaded it a while back during the writing olympics. Hope everyone enjoys it. Sorry if you've read it before. I notice ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Storm.
Storm A brilliant sun with skies so blue, The day so warm, and flowers in bloom. Clouds roll in, dark and low, The sun now hidden as the rain pours ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: I See You
[Verse:] I know it's not fair to say that we're that close But thats just how life goes, you come and you go woah oh oh. I know it's not ...
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: Hibernation
Back where I’m from, people ask me if it’s cold where I live, as if expecting a “Yeah bro, Fucking cold.” But the truth is that Minnesota winters are worse ...
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: Life In the Eyes Of a Godless Man
I only changed two words from the original draft, which I spontaneously wrote. I was quite shocked at how these words just came out. It's very simple though. -----------------------------------------
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: (I'm) A Shadowed Girl
I remember writing this when I was twelve. :)) Shadowed Girl I’m a shadowed girl-- Too timid to show all that I’ve got Too shy to let them know me ...
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: Being a Teenager
So, I know this poem doesn't rhyme! :? This is the first poem I've ever write, it just came to my mind! “Being a teenager is like passing through a ...
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: Our Time
I wrote this at 1:00am yesterday... I was like half in limbo and I couldn't sleep so... I don't know... LOL Lying in the dark Drowning in my tears Crying ...
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: All I'm Asking For
This is my first poem, and i didn't even planned to do this. so go crazy for it, or not xD I’m not asking for a lot of attention I’m ...
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: Life is a Journey
I'm not much of the poetry writer, but I was really proud of this one. It's called a Rondel for those of you who want to know. I hope you ...
Oct 30, 2010 -
Re: Brave On
Brave On Brave on my soldier, Surely, I will never ruffle your hair again, I love you, Too much to say, A thousand lessons left to instill, No time, A ...
Oct 28, 2010 -
Re: NaNoWriMo theme song.
I may have some bad errors in here... Just tip me off if you see any puncuation things or something. This came to mind when I was in chat. :D ...
Oct 28, 2010
