foxtails

this is a beautiful reflection on what its like to be a woman. its powerful. your narrative & language evokes a strong emotional response. the recurring theme of tragedy throughout ...

this is a very meaningful piece. words hold a lot of power. diversity should be celebrated & this is a perfect representation of that. it questions why we treat people ...

short, sweet, simple. all are great qualities to have. your poem is very straightforward yet it gets the point across effectively. i like the way you repeat the one line ...

for such a short poem, this is very skillfully written. its evident that the narrator is diving into concepts of desire & possession, but theres a layer of ambiguity. the ...

love is immersive. this poem hits the nail on the head. everything is concise due to the length of the poem, but that means each line carries significant weight & ...

this poem really gets into the nitty-gritty of identity & all the messy stuff that comes with it. the contrasting experiences of the speaker & the pretty boy are especially ...

this is a really interesting exploration of self-discovery. i think your usage of symbolism throughout is compelling. youve set a solid timeline here. your first stanza is the foundation with ...

i feel this poem in my chest. its strikingly real. its like taking a trip down memory lane. the language reminisces about a time when things were simpler & the ...

im not usually a reader of spiritual poetry because im not a spiritual person, but this caught my eye for some reason. let's gooooo your words here beautifully capture devotion ...

i cant believe you are new to poetryyyy whoa your poem paints a clear picture of someone feeling the weight of judgment from others. thats a relatable experience, but its ...

i have no clue what a triptych is, but i do loveee poetry. :) youre really getting into the nitty-gritty of love here, showing that its not all sunshine & ...

internal dialogues are tricky, but i love them anywayyy youve got an interesting relationship between the voice of doubt & voice of reason here. its a bit tricky to tell ...