forest_ofthe_nightingale

I must say I agree with you on the title, Chevy. Not my favorite, but I have no idea what would be a good title. I'm open to ideas. Also: ...

Hey- the poetry was good, but I liked the format best. You win. (and thanks to Dusky for pointing out that we can see it all pretty). Yup, its all ...

I agree on the formatting... needs some spacing between thoughts. But I liked it, so good job!

I can't believe you knew what I was talking about, yoha!!! I freaked out when I saw it this morning but couldn't find words that were worthy of it. :( ...

Apologies for not being picky while I read. :D It seems like most people don't follow grammatical rules, so when there's (finally) someone who expects us to pay attention to ...

The last stanza was rather cliche, but since your poem was sort of an explanation for the cliched (if you even understand what I'm trying to say) "Silence can be ...

So many memories! I guess I'm biased because I know all the fun attached to this poem, but I really like it!!! Yay you!

How do you delete? I hate this poem.

Thanks... is the ending any better? I still don't know if I like it or not.

To explain the story behind the poem: Brook Krogel was a girl a met through swimming last year. She was really sweet and didn't look down on underclassmen like most ...

Wait, Bobo, you've confused me... can you send me an example of what you consider "true poetry". I'd just like to get an idea of what you mean... right now ...

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... whoa. Awesome. It sounds like a song ( don't kill me for this)... i kept hearing a rapper read it as I did.

This was a lovely poem. I especially like this part: The intoxicated creatures of idyll world, Open up and tend to light. Amazing job.

thanks for sparing me, Liz! lol. Any criticism is welcome.