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Heyy Bri! Nice to see that you FINALLY wrote something, slow much?? 'Kay done with the best friend opinionated comments :P ...Good job on this, but I have to agree ...

Twin! This is awesome!! I love the stanza : Glass is easily broken, And permafrost never melts. I am confined to this existence, Where there is little else to see. ...

Heyy! This was a really good story. I loved the title of this piece, it immediately drew me in. I love how you changed the points of views, and made ...

Haha, this is a really good story! I really liked the title, it drew me in instantly. I especially loved how you wrote out the word sixteenth instead of using ...

'Kayy so nitpicks first! I could’ve lived in Buckingham Palace; if it was still with that man, I would change this to "could have"... It was like a putrid wall ...

The other reviewers basically pointed out all the mistakes...But, this was a really good piece and I think it should be continued. I can see how Bobby is similar to ...

Heyy Ballerina! I think Winter's Twelfth Night covered all the nitpicks, but be sure to edit those. Being the grammar Nazi that I am, I think mechanics can make or ...

Heyy Evi, Excellent job on this...I never thought much of killing an ant, but I can totally relate to this! I'm impressed with how you connected such a small event ...

Wow Rosey this is really good...I couldn't find any nitpicks that anti-pop hadn't fixed...This story isn't what I expected when I read the prompt, but it is really good! I ...

Heyy, I didn't have many nitpicks in this, but the few that I did are in caps in the quote I hope you’ll be happier now, seeing as that’s one ...

I can't believe no one reviewed this! Must be because they were too intimidated... :P Inspecting it closer, she smiled to herself. ‘50 dollars,’ was scrawled across the middle of ...

'Kay so nitpicks! As usual :P Comments are in caps... I stared at myself in the mirror, watching my thighs, my stomach, my arms, my DELETE THE MY everything jiggle. ...

Heyy, This poem was really good and I loved the theme of everything...Like the other reviews, I have to say that the 2nd stanza needs a little work...Overall, it was ...

Wow this was really good. I loved the environmental part in this and the way you made it relate to the bigger picture. Especially loved the way the roses symbolize ...

This was really good princess! I'm glad you aren't quitting writing though...Hehe, you're waaaaay too good to quit :) It's a pretty common theme, but the way you portrayed it ...