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Wow, Princess! This is really good...I didn't really have any nitpicks with this...I liked how it's short yet conveys the meaning perfectly. The one thing that I didn't really like ...

Nice job on this! Small nitpick here : Yes, I come from a rather, healthy family, per say. There shouldn't be a comma between rather and healthy...and as Jay said, ...

Wow, this is a really good poem! I wish that I could write poetry this well...So, anywayz, nitpicks : Moments, Only for moments it’s just us. This is just my ...

Whoa, meep! You said that you didn't write well, are you kidding me???? This is AWESOME! Haha, being a Singaporean, I can see why it would be embarrassing to have ...

Heyy Princess! I loved this but it seemed sooo tragic...The fading star dies?? :( Oh how bright your smile! I think Evi's right in this one and that the "oh" ...

Hi! I don't really have any nitpicks on this story that the other reviewers haven't covered, but I don't really get the ending...Who dies and who kills whom?? I feel ...

Hi twin! So, 'pparently I never read this...**gasp** A piece of yours that you haven't bugged me to read yet!?!?! I didn't know that was possible!! 'Kay, so sarcastic/mean/best friend ...

Hahahaha! Wow, Meep, you're hilarious! I loved Twilight, then everyone else started to obsess over it so y'know...The YWS God??? Haha, I loved that! Great job on this and gold ...

Haha, I loved this poem! I loved how you decided to describe how it felt having a perfect relative...I thought that the rhythm was consistent, although the rhyme was somewhat ...

Haha, I thought this was hilarious...Yet, I found a couple of spelling nitpicks... "Except for the time you kicked Peter Henderson and ten people sworw they saw you? There was ...

Hello there! I found a couple of punctuation errors in this, but I'm really bad at grammar, so I'm not too sure how to fix it...'Kayy, on with the actual ...

One I'm not sure why you put the chapter number here.... Realisation dawning, I quickly tried to hide behind a cluster of fisherman, holding my breath so as not to ...

Heyy Dudette! Nitpicks first... One I wouldn't put the chapter number here... Staring across the silent, square room, I stifled a yawn. Calling it square is an odd way to ...

Yay! I feel special now :D ... But, twin! You spelled epically wrong!! And, outgoing is one hyphen there...Tsk, tsk...:P, whoa you're right! I do sound like Em...Oh well! Gold ...

Wow! This is beautiful! I don't know what to say! Are you sure that you don't write short stories a lot? This is perfect and I can't imagine this by ...