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Re: The eye of Night.
It was beautiful even though you gave imagery of ugly things i still found it lovely how you worded and promoted imagery in your poem.], i can grasp what you ...
Oct 19, 2012 -
Re: Stream of Consciousness
Well i couldnt grasp what the story is fully about but it was in all an intense, riveting story. It stimulates my sense i actually felt theoppressing heat and when ...
Oct 19, 2012 -
Re: Visualization
It was a great meaningful poem about how a guy simply spends his saturday night. I read through this a couple times. I thought it was talking about how he ...
Oct 14, 2012 -
Re: Kiss
Its beautiful. its almost like a riddle. I think it is a riddle but i cant quite grasp it. It sounds like a girl that would get in the way ...
Oct 13, 2012 -
Re: Father and son
So true. i remember coming up with the question why are the female and male body parts are different. That was way back when i was four. Yes kids will ...
Oct 13, 2012 -
Re: I Am Who I Am
It is always good to find the good things in something bad. This poem explains how you became who you are today from the ways of your family who had ...
Oct 13, 2012 -
Re: January Snow
It was a a sad and powerful piece. It gave a good description on what it is like to have a broken heart and to feel the ice cold winters ...
Oct 13, 2012 -
Re: Woman's World...
It rhymed and flowed all too well. It had a feeling of passion. The sound, and the imagery gave off utter beauty. It was a little too deep but i ...
Oct 13, 2012
