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florageis

  • Poetry » General, General Re: The eye of Night.

    It was beautiful even though you gave imagery of ugly things i still found it lovely how you worded and promoted imagery in your poem.], i can grasp what you ...

    Oct 19, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Other Re: Stream of Consciousness

    Well i couldnt grasp what the story is fully about but it was in all an intense, riveting story. It stimulates my sense i actually felt theoppressing heat and when ...

    Oct 19, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Visualization

    It was a great meaningful poem about how a guy simply spends his saturday night. I read through this a couple times. I thought it was talking about how he ...

    Oct 14, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Kiss

    Its beautiful. its almost like a riddle. I think it is a riddle but i cant quite grasp it. It sounds like a girl that would get in the way ...

    Oct 13, 2012
  • Short Story » Other, Other Re: Father and son

    So true. i remember coming up with the question why are the female and male body parts are different. That was way back when i was four. Yes kids will ...

    Oct 13, 2012
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: I Am Who I Am

    It is always good to find the good things in something bad. This poem explains how you became who you are today from the ways of your family who had ...

    Oct 13, 2012
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: January Snow

    It was a a sad and powerful piece. It gave a good description on what it is like to have a broken heart and to feel the ice cold winters ...

    Oct 13, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Woman's World...

    It rhymed and flowed all too well. It had a feeling of passion. The sound, and the imagery gave off utter beauty. It was a little too deep but i ...

    Oct 13, 2012


The universe will reward you for taking risks on its behalf.
— Shakti Gawain