The eye of Night.

It was beautiful even though you gave imagery of ugly things i still found it lovely how you worded and promoted imagery in your poem.], i can grasp what you are trying to display.It made sense. It was well put i was able to grasp it. It was rather depressing how you described the city streets with children but they still have hope.Sometimes that is the only thing we have. It is too bad that things start becoming gloomy when the sun leaves at night.

Good job. Here's a review: You did really job showing emotion about night. Each stanza presents a different story, and each one is never finished, leaving the reader to ponder the meaning of each story. It seems kind of dark, I wonder if the street children's hopes ever come true...The only mistake I saw is in stanza 3, it says "street childrens" instead of "street children" Besides that, very well edited! Nice job!