fireheartedkaratepup

Oi, Ehte! I was never notified you replied to this. XP You mind using the pretty little pm button on the side?

Gah. These are all so good that the nitpicks I had flew out of my head. I can't think. I'll come back tomorrow.

Skins, I love you. That is all.

Haha, I love it--how you set it up as a suicide, then do almost a 180 and reveal that he's actually attached to a bungee cord. XD The flow seemed ...

I coughed, the smoke of the burning fires irritating my throat , t he embers flying in the slight breeze as my village burned to the ground. My fingers grasped ...

Ok, now that you've rewritten it I'll go back to my usual reviewing style. I didn’t know , but right now I had to work or I wouldn't survive much ...

Hahaha, I love this. Seriously.

I have a friend who write like this. I don't really get it. Nice. (I think.)

WAGH. AWESOME. It's without, not with out. One word. Also, unless you want to give it special emphasis, watching shouldn't be capitalized on the last line.

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...............oh my god. Um, I'll come back and review (if I remember) when the shock wears off.

BAHAHAHAHA, I LOVE IT. Do you mind if I share this? I'll give you full credit, of course.

Um......dreg? I like you. I don't like this. At all. What prompted this?

Still trying to wrap my head around all of it. What was the purpose of the smaller letters ? It seemed random to me. .........that's really all I can think ...

Every single one of them. (Eragon deserves a shining mention (and I don't mean shining in a good way.)) The only exceptions are Disney movies and Bridge to Terabithia.