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  • Poetry » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: I Want

    Hi there! I really loved the imagery you used here, and I only have a few little things to point out. First, this poem was a little hard to read ...

    Aug 21, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Subject: Hello.

    Hey there! I enjoyed this piece but found myself wanting more. Who is this letter meant for? What is their relationship to the writer? Why was the letter written in ...

    Aug 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Lucid Dreaming

    Hi there! I'm really glad I chose to read this poem. I love the rhythm it has to it in the beginning, and the fact that the meaning of this ...

    Aug 17, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: Deleted

    Hi there! So I'm here to review your poem, so you'll have to bare with me, I'm not to good at this. lol Okay so I really loved all the ...

    Feb 21, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Horror Re: A Murderer?

    wow. That's all my brain is saying, hold on let me recover, your brilliance has left me speechless. Okay. I love a good scary story and I love how this ...

    Feb 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Satire, Humor Re: i am don.

    Hello! Okay I LOVE this poem omg. I literally spit water out all over the computer I was laughing so hard. I really don't have anything negative to say about ...

    Feb 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Retrospect

    Hey! So I really loved this poem! It was really great. I really loved that Clarity, Imagery, Rhetoric, and Metaphor are portrayed as children. this is not something you see ...

    Feb 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Writer's Block

    Hi. this is only my third review so sorry if its crappy, I'm still getting the hang of it. First of all, I really love this. I feel this perfectly ...

    Feb 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Satire, Romantic Re: ily

    I really like this. I really enjoyed the last two stanzas where the character leaves the woman. When I read it I just smiled, good for him! I absolutely loved ...

    Feb 13, 2014
  • Short Story » Other, Narrative Re: We Only Break

    Wow, I really love this. I really enjoyed reading this because for one, I feel like I can relate to the robot. This is something I personally think is important ...

    Feb 13, 2014


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