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Hehe, thanks for the review! Funny, it's almost like you read my mind, as to the weirdo feeling and everything. It was exactly my intention. (Do you ever get the ...

Yep! :)

Yep! :)

Good point you made there! I agree with you.

Thank you :) That was meant to be a metaphor - use your imagination :P

Thanks for the review - congrats on the 3rd star, by the way :)

You're welcome! Off to read that poem now :)

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Thanks for the lovely review! I'm a bit confused though, what do you mean about the choppiness, exactly? How do you think I should revise it? I'd love to hear ...

Thank you for your critique :)

Thanks - you make a good point there, I'll use it :)

Thank you for your review! This was meant to be confusing (maybe I should have made that more clear - haha, pun). But I'm definitely going to continue it in ...

Thank you :) You make an interesting comment, about the mind of a madman, and the rawness. I may have to implement that further...