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I like the way you reviewed this, it's very helpful. I agree with some of your suggestions but not with others (I've always seen "cornflakes" as one word, and it ...

Thank you for the suggestions, I will definitely make use of them (after Review Day, of course! :) )

Thank you for the review, it's very helpful. Making sense is definitely something I need to work on :P I was intending to make this into a series of stories ...

Thank you! :)

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I understand now. :) Thank you for the insight, but I'll leave it this way out of personal preference.

I will! :)

Thank you for the review - good suggestion, I agree with you! :)

Thanks so much :) I actually rewrote half the poem - it used to have a different subject altogether. I can't even remember what.

Thank you for your lovely review! I hope you like it here so far. If you post anything I'll be sure to review it too! :)

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You're welcome :) What do you mean by "metal", though? *googles* Ooh, it's in fact spelled "show your mettle"! That's cool. I haven't heard of that saying before, but I ...

haha :)

Thank you for being honest :) You have an interesting interpretation of the poem - I might have to use it sometime. But it was really just a description of ...

Thank you for the lovely review! :) The first half of that stanza was a direct Spongebob reference! The world needs more laughter.