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Thank you for the excellent advice :) Ellis is actually a different character altogether, perhaps I should make it more clear. E.g. start it out with "3072 miles away..." Again, ...

:D Making sense is not my strong suit.

Numbers are merely approximations and therefore invalid. (If you have two apples of different sizes... do you have two apples, or is one of them 76% of the other apple?)

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No, that's not harsh at all! Thank you for being honest - I definitely need to work on this story. I'm glad to know what I need to improve - ...

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Thanks for the excellent critique :) You made some very good points.

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Thank you so much, that honestly made my day :) I'll always remember your review.

But if the sea was infinite, there would be no room left for the cup, or for you! Which also means --->we don't exist! Ha! I told you so...

Thanks for the suggestions! :) You make a good point. I'll definitely play with the sentence structure and everything, and will consider it more in the rest of my poetry ...