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Hello person! (Thanks for reviewing my poem, by the way.) I'll be honest here: I have no idea what this is about. If that was your intent, well done; if ...

Hi person! Nitpicks before anything else: But, I can't look for fear of what's there the pain that's so rare It seems to me that the comma after "but" only ...

Wow. This is gorgeous, and I love the title. My favorite part - which left me breathless - was the last stanza. Overall, the imagery is very strange and thought-provoking, ...

Hi person! (warning - long review ahead) Nitpicks I'll quote the story but add in my suggestions, grammar-wise. Use as many as you want. I can feel my heart pounding ...

What a beautiful reflection (pun not intended). I really don't know what to say about this, it is literally one of the best things I have read on this website. ...

Before I say anything, I'd like to suggest something: consider putting spaces between your lines, and changing up the punctuation . It'll make it more dramatic. For example: I wake ...

Wow, this left me breathless. You have a knack for writing poetry with huge, powerful messages, and this one is no exception. Nitpicks (If I bold a word, that means ...

This poem is truly beautiful - the meaning one retains from it depends on the individual reading it. To me, it was as though the girl was going through some ...

Hi person! First of all, nitpicks: do you see a cit of depression That should be "city". Also, the last line went in a different font for some reason, try ...

Hi Magenta! I like the premise of the poem, the uncertain tone of the narrator - I began to feel a bit distressed myself (in a good way!). The part ...

This is an unusual, intriguing poem, and I've never read anything quite like this before. It made me think, and you did a marvelous job of exposing a topic that ...

This is a beautiful poem. Haikus are very easy to write in a contrived way, but this was definitely not the case here (double haiku is a good idea, by ...

Haha, the last line made me laugh (which was probably your intention) :) Wow, what a perfect way of putting it. They kind of scare me, honestly. But you know ...

This is a beautiful poem - is it from personal experience? I take ballet classes, and this is a lovely way to put the feeling of dance into words - ...

Woah. I really can't say anything negative about this, it's so intriguing. For some reason, it reminds me of Shel Silverstein. As I was reading the poem, I could hear ...