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YES YES YES YES YESYESYES someone else who reads stuff by Lemony Snicket!!! *victory dance* Anyway...I adore the particular book you have used as inspiration. Of course, this review is ...

Hai! (ha...see what I did there? Hai...ku.) Anyway...I found this to be rather intriguing. My favorite poem, overall, was "The Mask". I liked your use of "thirsting" in the one ...

I like this, especially the ending - I didn't expect it. I think that you expressed the topic very well - I felt like it was happening to me, beads ...

Hi there, person! I'm going to be brutally honest in this review - don't take anything personally. Nitpicks - don't forget to capitalize "Jack", and you're missing a few apostrophes ...

Whoa - what an ending. Before I say anything else, I'll point out nitpicks - Nine: The stolen cash was found under his matress. Should be "mattress" Two: there was ...

This is interesting, somewhat random (hence the title, I guess) as well, and I found it to be thought-provoking. I agree with the previous reviewer - you have decent imagery ...

I like the premise of this - it's a very original way to express your protagonist's feelings, not the typical "woe is me, you left me and now I'm going ...

Wow. This is probably because I'm a messed-up kind of person, but...this was marvelous in an extremely deranged way that will most likely lead to a few nightmares. I didn't ...

This is very beautiful, and the words roll off the tongue very naturally. I felt breathless after finishing the last stanza, and the whole poem made me shiver, I don't ...

Ohhh....whoa! Now I understand why you don't have punctuation! That's clever. And now it's making me think... is sanity really the opposite of insanity? The "sane" man is saying the ...

First of all...nitpicks. “Son, respect the one’s who wear the uniform. Your Pa is one.” I would change this part to "those", as you say "one" later on and it ...

Wow. For about ten seconds after reading this story, I just sat and stared at the last sentence. It's so powerful - not just the last sentence, but this whole ...

Hi person! This poem really made me think, and it's such an incredibly creative way to look at this weird world of ours! Just one thing - "lifeform" should be ...

Hi person! This poem is well written - it really says a lot more than its length might convey. You do need to work on grammar, though (I'll quote the ...

What? Uh...the last line made me laugh out loud. Overall, the poem is amusing. It sounds just like what I rant about all day (don't we all?). But anyway, despite ...