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felistia

The Seven Tribes of Megalonia

  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Gold and Silver

    Thank you for the review. I am glad that you thought the bold titles worked. I was afraid that it wouldn't. :D

    Apr 20, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Evening Firelight

    Thank you so much for the review. :D I do have another poem that I just wrote called Autumn Trails. It has a similar format to this one. :D

    Apr 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Evening Firelight

    Thank you for more encouraging words. :D P.S could you please leave a like, thanks. :D

    Apr 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Autumn Trails

    Thank you for the review. I do agree that in some area's the rhymes feel forced and I'll see if I can make it feel less forced. :D P.S could ...

    Apr 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Autumn Trails

    Thank you for the comment. I really appreciate it. P.S could you please leave a like. :D

    Apr 13, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 2

    Oh no. You didn't seem racist. :D

    Apr 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Autumn Trails

    Thank you for your review. :D

    Apr 13, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 2

    I am actually from South Africa, but my spell check is Australian. Sorry about that. :D It's great to hear that you were quoting from the bible. :D

    Apr 13, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: Search for the Ruby of Fire Chapter 37

    :D It didn't take you long at all once you got going and that doesn't matter to me. I am just glad that you got through it all. :D

    Apr 12, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: Search for the Ruby of Fire Chapter 37

    Hey Carlito, thank you so much for all those wonderfully helpful reviews you gave me and all the notifications. :D They were very insightful and it looks like I have ...

    Apr 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Stars and Galaxies

    P.S could you have a look at Polished Silver. It has a nice picture to and is about a wolf. :D

    Mar 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Stars and Galaxies

    Thanks for the review. :D To put in pictures you first click on the button Edit Work. Then just in-between the title of your work and the actual poem will ...

    Mar 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Freedom

    Sorry about the late reply. Thank you for the review. :D

    Mar 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Freedom

    Sorry about the late reply. Thank you for the review. I will see what I can do to fix it up a bit. :D

    Mar 15, 2016
  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: The Giant

    Thank you for the review. :D I am sorry about the very late reply. That wasn't the meaning I was going for, but it still is a great one and ...

    Mar 15, 2016


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien