felistia

Going to hopefully finish correcting the chapters by the end of the week. :D

Hello again Carlito. :D Thanks again for all the reviews you've given me. :D I've gone back through the story and added a whole lot of descriptive thoughts like you ...

Thanks for the review. I'm going to try and fix the rhymes. :D P.S could you please leave a like. :D

Thanks for the review. I will go ahead and try to fix the rhymes. P.S could you please leave a like? :D

Thanks for reviewing my poem. :D

Actually could you please wait a while before reading and review those chapters please. I want to go back and correct them before I get anymore reviews on them. I ...

Thanks for the review. I've gone back and corrected everything from the beginning of my story to now. Your advice has been a wonderful help and has helped me shape ...

no problem. but before I review your other chapters can you go and make the changes that I talked about in this review? Just let me know when you do. ...

Thank you for all your wonderful review and I will be sure to go back and change the problems. The bit about the guards noticing Zoltar's melted chain. The guards ...

I am really sorry that I sort of ranted in this review. I was having a really bad day. I found out that I have to move again for the ...

Thanks for the review. I agree that it feels unfinished now that I look at it. I will have a brain storm and see if I can expand on it. ...

I completely agree. :D

Thanks for the review. :D

Thank you for the review. I am glad that you thought the bold titles worked since I thought they wouldn't. I'm also glad that you like the rhymes. :D