felistia

Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it. :D P.s Please leave a like. :D

Thanks for the review. :D I was talking about my god. :D P.s Please leave a like.

Remind me to review this on review day this month. :D

Thanks for the comment and welcome to the site. :D P.s could you please leave a like. :D

Thanks for the review. :D P.s could you please leave a like. :D

Thank you so much for the review. :D P.S could you please leave a like. :D

Thanks for the review. :D I will need your permission to paste it on my new book that would be publish end of this month. Sure. :D

Thank you so much for the review. I'll look into the mistakes. Quick thing though, I said that Scorpus was Zoltar's father. :D

Thanks for the review. :D As for the last question about talking about different aspects of the story, I'd really like to hear your thoughts on how the plot is ...

Thanks so much for your review. I'll go back and fix the chapter soon. At the moment I'm fixing book one after some more reviews and I'm also planning out ...

Thanks for the review. Before you review anymore could you wait a few weeks. After all the review's I got on review day I've got a lot of rewriting to ...

Thanks for the review. I've taken what you've said on-board and have rewritten the chapter. I must say... it does look better know. Thanks. :D

You should delete this one and post it on chapter 17. :D

Thanks again for another great review. :D

Thanks for the review. I'm glad you're getting into the story. I have such trouble with setting up the first few chapters, but once I get into the story it's ...