felistia

Thanks so much for another review. Don't feel worried about getting to these reviews slowly. I'm right in the middle of rewriting the first seven chapters so it's not like ...

Thank you. :D I got the idea from the Water Horse movie. :D

Thanks again for the review. I haven't be on the site much lately. I'm fixing up the first six chapters of my story as those seem to be in need ...

Thank you so much for another round of reviews. Sorry I haven't been to responsive. I completely agree on the bit with Felistia, Zoltar and Shiraku in the cave being ...

Thank you so much for such an in depth review. It's great to see you again. I'll get to editing as soon as I can. I'm trying to complete the ...

Thanks for the review. Here's the link

Thank you for another review. :D About that bit with the tablet, I went and edited near the end of chapter 16 to show that he read the tablet. About ...

Thank you so much for another review. The next part will be out soon. I've decided I'm going to go back and edit this story once I've finished this first ...

Thanks for all your review. I'm sorry I haven't been replying much lately. Life's got a bit busy. On the subject of the maze, it encircles the island, so they ...

Thank you so much for the last two review. Sorry I haven't replied sooner. I've been very busy. I'll get to editing out the problems as soon as I can. ...

Thank for the review. I'll get to editing as soon as possible. :D

Thank for another review. (I've stayed awake tonight so that I could wait for you to write it. :D) The part about why Zoltar and the other Shadow Talons are ...

Thank you for another review. I'll get to editing right away. I'm falling behind. :D

Just finished the Misty Mountain Island map in chapter 8 if you want to have a peek. :D

Thank you for another review. I've placed a map of Megalonia in the first chapter and I'm busy working on one for the island. I'll let you know when it's ...