felistia

Thank you very much for the review. You bring up quite a few points that I agree with. I'll try to apply them to the story as I carry on ...

Thank you. I've actually have been working on this draft for a few months and I got some time today to polish it off so that I could release it. ...

Sure. Thank you. :D

I told you. Don't worry I'll post the next chapter as soon as possible. Do you want me to tag you?

Thank you. Lol. You're going to hate me for what I do in the next one.

Thank you. I've just posted another two chapters. :D

Thank you. :D

Hi Cocoa. I love your story so far. Could you please tag me for future posts?

Please tag me when you release a chapter. It was a great read and I'd love to follow the story. Off to read the other chapters now. :D

Sure. :D What chapter would you like me to start reviewing on?

Thank you. It's great to hear that this draft is better than the last one. I've made a few changes to the plot and it feels a lot smoother to ...

Thank you. :D

Thank you for the review. It's great to see you again. Thanks for the insight. I'll get to editing as soon as possible. About lightning flashing through the smoke when ...

P.S how's my dialogue. That was were I was lacking in the last draft and I really tried to get it better in this draft. Can you point out where ...

Thank you so much for another review. I look forward to the next one. :D