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Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Eighteen
Thank you for another review. I went back and edited the fight. It was too short. What do you think of it now?
Jul 30, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Twenty
Thank you so much for another review. We'll learn much more in the coming chapters. :D Thanks for pointing out that typo. Need to fix that right way. Lol.
Jul 24, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Nineteen
*review. Lol. Not chapter.
Jul 16, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Nineteen
Thank you again for another chapter. I'll see about writing the next one soon. :D
Jul 16, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Eighteen
Thank you for another review. I thought the fight might be a bit short, but didn't want it to drag out. I'll work on that. Thank again. :D
Jul 9, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Seventeen
Thank you for another great review. Shiraku can't handle rain because she's a swimming dragon and has smaller wings to streamline swimming. She has less powerful flight because of that. ...
Jul 8, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Seventeen
Thank you so much for a review. Glad you liked the chapter. :D
Jul 8, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Sixteen
Thank you so much again for another review. Glad you're liking this so far. :D
Jul 7, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Fourteen
Thank you for another great review. Glad you liked it. They are bonding due to being alone and having gone through a lot, but I have planned a disruption, you ...
Jul 3, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Thirteen
Thank you for another review. I do hope you'll continue to review. :D You've given me quite a bit to think about with this chapter. :D
Jul 2, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Ten
Thanks so much again for another review. :D
Jun 29, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Ten
Thanks so much again for another review. :D
Jun 29, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Fourteen
Thank you for another review. :D You make a good point about Zoltar. Zoltar will start to grow in confidence and will start to get the lay of the land. ...
Jun 28, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Eight
Thank you so much for another review. I look forward to it every day. :D It's common for dragons to fight to take control of the tribe that way the ...
Jun 27, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Six
Thank you so much for another review. Glad you thought the movement of emotions was smooth. I do agree that Hisster could spend a bit more time on Nira and ...
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