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Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 13
Thank you for the review. :D I'll tag you in the coming chapters. So far I have 27. I'd highly recommend ready from the beginning as the plot really relays ...
Sep 30, 2021 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 27
Thank you so much for the review. This chapter was very hard to write (due to the emotions) but I'm so happy with how it turned out. It is going ...
Sep 30, 2021 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 27
Thank you so much for the review. This chapter was so hard to write. I recognize that one part were the shift was too sudden, but wasn't sure how to ...
Sep 29, 2021 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 26
Thank you so much for the review. This was a terribly hard chapter to write for obvious reasons. P.S This is actually @FlamingPhoenix's fault. Originally the dragon being killed was ...
Sep 10, 2021 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 26
Thank you so much for the review. This was such a hard chapter to write. I felt terrible about my self.
Sep 10, 2021 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 25
Thank you so much for the review. :D I did mention this ritual in the previous draft, but it was only through dialogue. I never actually showed it. This chapter ...
Sep 5, 2021 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 25
Thank you so much for the review. Now that I look back, I can see that some parts of the chapter went by a little fast. I'll have to correct ...
Sep 4, 2021 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 13
Thank you for the review. :D I'd love if you read the previous chapters. Here's a link to the first chapter and prologue.
Sep 3, 2021 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Prologue
Thank you for the review. :D
Sep 3, 2021 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 24
Thank you so much for the review. The part about Emerald being a dragonet or at least a rather young adult is new. I thought it would play nicely into ...
Aug 28, 2021 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 24
Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad this little twist surprised you and that it was unexpected. :D
Aug 28, 2021 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 23
Thank you for the review. For some reason this chapter gave me a lot of trouble and it shows. I'll have to come back later and edit it. :D
Aug 23, 2021 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 23
Thank you so much for the review. Shiraku is such fun to write. :D
Aug 23, 2021 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 22
Thank you so much for the review. :D I was really looking forward to you reading this chapter. When I started writing this draft, I wanted a more direct villain ...
Aug 3, 2021 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 22
Thank you so much for the review. I agree now that I look back, that I should have included more emotions at the beginning of the chapter. I'm so glad ...
Aug 3, 2021
