felistia

Felistia here with a review. What a great piece of writing. The everyone shouldn't follow everyone else tone is excellent. I for one never follow fashion. It costs you lots ...

I absolutely love this. It is so moving and the theme is excellent. I couldn't agree more about what you are saying. I am a little confused about the set ...

Hi felistia here. I would like to write a review. I like all the colours and the general imagery, it sets the stage well, but there is room for more. ...

Hi I would like to leave a review. There are a few mistakes in the story, the beginning feels a little clumsy and doesn't flow well. The information in it ...

It is a little difficult to picture where the characters are in the story, like in the sentence ( “Yes, I know,” Bishop said, as the four continued to wander ...

This is clever writing. It is hilarious and catches your attention. It could have been longer and should maybe have had a bit more colour in it. In the part ...

Oh come on! More! I what more! How can that be the end, come on I need more. Excellent writing, very emotional. It needs a little more description about where ...

This is a very haunting story, dark and full of mystery and suspense. The start of the story was captivating and set the stage perfectly. The story was consistent and ...

It is a sweet story. I would have like to have had a little bit more description, because I find it hard to vision what the room looks like. All ...

The first sentence doesn't flow very well compered the rest of the story. I like the way you told it, so that it sounded more like an enchanted wood with ...

It is definitely a scary story and I kind of wish that there was more. The writing drew me in and held me there, so that I couldn't take my ...

It is a very captivating prologue and is a good start to a book, but there are a few minor spelling mistakes.The physical pain was a sword though the chest, ...