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Re: Even Great Kings Die
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks Laying amidst the dead and fires that lite the field which all the good had been ...
Jul 8, 2016 -
Re: The War Against Humanity.
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks Hundreds dead, thousands injured, are lying around in pools of their own blood. I would rate ...
Jul 3, 2016 -
Re: Ding Dong
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Grammar and Punctuation He has a phone, he has the computer, he has the neighbours next door. ...
Jun 30, 2016 -
Re: i don't usually write happy poems, and this is why
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks it was the best thing I had ever seen, I think this would flow better if ...
Jun 29, 2016 -
Re: Another Zombie Novel (not actual title) Prologue part 1
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks The only source of heat that barley covered the cast empty space came from a single, ...
Jun 28, 2016 -
Re: I Am Nobody
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks I feel the paper cut a crevice into my skin. I hiss while I bring my ...
Jun 28, 2016 -
Re: disjointed
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Title: Okay let's start with the title of your poem. It's defiantly intriguing and invites the reader ...
Jun 28, 2016 -
Re: Anyone Can Kill
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks Alexandra wrote on it, obeying. Writing down obeying in this sentence as well seems a bit ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: Elodie Bones & The Stonewall Hounds: Chapter II
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks the lock was in the inside. I think this would read better if you replaced "in" ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: In the Absence of Stars - 3.1
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks "Buff's paranoid. He thinks anyone he doesn't know is there to personally ruin his side of ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: In the Absence of Stars - 2.5
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks The barrel of a steely gun is pointed right at my head. Cat's hand isn't even ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Urban Legends - Chapter 1: RETURN
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks If he attacks with his knife, I'm prepared to step inside the apartment that now belongs ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Land of The Dying Sun 2: Under The Starry Sky
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Overall thoughts Story plot: Okay so since I didn't read the first chapter (I can't read anything ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: In the Absence of Stars - 2.4
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks He always seemed to think that people with green eyes were blessed, touched by God, ascended ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: The Other Side
Hi mihaivisan, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Overall thoughts Story plot: When I first started reading this, I thought it was going to ...
Jun 26, 2016