fallenoutofgrace

Hi there it's time for a review kiddies! alright to first off when you write; " I assumed that the eye colors represented what they shot." I think it be ...

Alright so first off just re-read over to proof read; that's the only negative that I could find that you may have rushed and just added a letter or a ...

Alright you definitely hit the chill factor. But the chill was from the darkness and eerie tone from it your words were powerful and you used them gracefully. I could ...

Alright Holy cow that was freaky cool, now that the spasm is over lets get over. First off I liked the emotion you sent through the characters and I liked ...

Hey here to review you, so lets get started. First off when I read the title, " The monster in your closet" I was expecting a monsters inc. or a ...

I like your idea an as for Hatshepsut I don't think she's lost pre-say more like the gears working behind the scenes. As for your story, Nicely done I can't ...

Hey fallen here to review. So I find that there has to be a deeper meaning in this poem, the interference that I find is that perhaps that either one ...

First off howdy and happy review day now lets get started, first off while some will say you should keep the black roses parts with the black roses parts and ...

*quick explosion* THIS WAS INCREDIBLE!!!!!! * fans out* Your imagery were Beyond amazing for instance, " The most beautiful part of the day is the sunrise. It makes its ascent ...

* pads in* Good Murrow Good writer and May I begin this review, Fallen here so lets get started. First off The power in this poem was amazing and beautiful ...

Amazing! you nailed the stages of rejection. I enjoyed how you kept your format the same with the repetition of three such as ( refresh, refresh, refresh) it aids in ...

First off * applauds* well done on tis thought provoking poem. I honestly see noting to tear apart so I apologize for not being any help there. But I will ...

Fallen here to review you so first off just minor spelling errors nothing you can't change with a once over. Now on to the praise shall we? ( apologize for ...

First off hey there fallen here for this very happy review day, I apologize for typos if there are any. So lets get started first off, Love how you use ...

Omg thisis the coolest idea in the world! Never thought that one could creste the gods in complete different ways(aplogize for spelling errors) first question why dose mason hate the ...