fallenoutofgrace

Hello fallen here to review your work lets get started shall we? First off I love your word choice and I very much enjoyed the " hter was you and ...

I like what you did here in saying that some reviews may seem rude and a little bit more critical that need be, even if they are completely honest. I ...

Alrighty fallen here with another review: First off the reaction for me was like. You nailed what happens when a person cuts and it rally is a nightmare and a ...

It's fallen here giving you another review First off love your story it really caught my eye. I like how its almost like two friends just talking about life it ...

Ello there, This is fallen coming at you with another review. Let's begin. First off Loved you using the shadow guards and the vampires it was like mission impossible gone ...

Ello it's fallen here for that favorite time of the day Review time! now lets get started :3 First off I have mixed feelings on Amy now did she really ...

Hey there it's fallen for that time of the day Review time! so lets get started. First off, I'm a hybrid supernatural geek to the max and you managed to ...

Hey there just agreeing with what camoryann said " This work is very very good. I am extremely impressed. You captured quite well a good majority of the things that ...

*a white wolf with a jay feather tucked behind her ears appears from the shadows* I have come to review your story :3 lets get started. Seriously love how creative ...

* a lone white wolf pads into a jay feather tucked behind her ear* Greeting known author I have bestow upon you thy review *dips head* shall we begin? I ...

Hey sunshine it's fallen coming at you with an awesome review:3 first off I love your repetition of the hello Is greeting, more than a word but giving different meanings ...

*a white wolf appears with a jay feather tucked behind her ear* Greetings I have come to review your poem. So first off, I agree with your poe and that ...

This is an amazing poem :3 Really well written and I love your rhythm and diction. Now quoting people beneath. " BloodinkSeesFootage says... I love the idea here, of something ...

Hey its fallen here going to review your short poem :3 ( and when I say short I mean it in this case) This isn't bad and it actually works ...

lol i find it funny that when you used slang i had no idea what you were talking about so well done with that. :3 now i like how your ...