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no problem! glad it helped :D

thanks so much for your review! i'll definitely look into refining the connections between the stanzas.

i can definitely work on the organization a little bit--this actually didn't start as one poem, but rather as a collection of disparate ideas that were somehow similar enough to ...

ahh an old gem from when i was 11... thank youu :)

thanks!! it's always interesting to through the archive of old stories lol

oh my goodness i wrote this seven years ago T^T i was quite literally eight at the time so it's a relief to know that i nailed the voice thanks ...

thank you so much for your comments! we'll see about the competitions %uD83D%uDE05

Thank you so much! You're too kind

Thank you so much for all of your comments! :)

thanks so much again! :)

thanks for the review! :D

ah, you're too kind. thank you so much!

Thanks for the review! :)

Thank you for the thoughtful review! Your suggestions make a lot of sense. :)

thanks for the review! i'm actually not quite sure why i decided to do include the religious imagery. this poem was quite rushed. :D