erilea

Happy Review Day, SereneSimpliciT! Which team are ya' on? Starting, now. I believe "'til" should be "'till". I don't know if I'm correct, but if I am, then please fix ...

Hey, Happy Review Day, animaldoctor! First of all, I think you meant to put a period here. "find food These creatures" Again, typo. "Don;t" should be "don't". "sense that we ...

Beautifully written! I loved this, and Happy Review Day! First, I'm just telling you numbers are usually written out in books. Therefore, "7" should be "seven". "I will be turning ...

I love this poem, and Happy Review Day! First, is this necessary? "Caring not if others fall" Why not "Not caring"? And also, you don't have to capitalize this... "Only ...

Heya, porcupinestrongwill! This is wisegirl22 here for review day! Well, let's start off with the errors, and then some praise. First of all, I see darkness is used two times, ...

Hi, unknown391625! Wisegirl22 here. Happy Review Day! :) First of all, I recommend using some more vivid descriptions. This one is so cliche. "A giant green and blue ball," How ...

Heya, wisegirl22 here to review your work. This poem was beautiful, but praise later. First of all, there is a rhyme scheme change here. I dunno if you meant to, ...

Heya, paula08! I'm here to review. Okay, let's start off with this. "that you'll be always safe and sound" "where the tigers don't make a sound." I think "sound" isn't ...

Before everything else, hi. Wisegirl22 here. I found some nitpicks. In the title, "call", "it", and "day" should be capitalized. Unless you want it lowercase...? "Why call it a day?" ...

Hey! Wisegirl22 here for a review. First of all, I think this doesn't look quite right. Please explain what you mean by this phrase. "Sometimes stutter whirling around flaws" And ...

Hi, lady dinosaur! Wisegirl22 for a review. I'll start off with the nitpicks. I see, in the first two starting lines, these are separated. I'm not sure this was necessary. ...

I'll start off with the errors, then cheer you up with praise. Okay, the first sentence: "A heroes death is always beautiful." "Heroes" should be "hero's", because the hero owns ...

This was awesome. I read your description and immediately clicked this when I saw the work satyr. I do love Greek Mythology. OK, let me get this straight. Which world ...

I really like the first and third lines, they were great metaphors/hyperboles(not sure which)! I basically have the same concerns as rhiasofia did, so nothing to correct, except that the ...

This was great, rhiasofia! I really think you trapped me in the main idea, and the title grabbed me, too. A few little nitpicks: "story behind a snapshot" Is there ...