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Hey, Tronks! Long work you've got here... Gonna take me some time, eh? :D Okay, let's dive in! This word you've got here... "Keying." This just sounds strange. I would ...

Atsmai! So good to see you posting a work! How's it goin'? :D Okay, first off! This line doesn't really make sense to me. What's a "crash screen?" I would ...

Hey there, Acm! Artemis here to review your work. So... Wow! This was so true (for high schoolers, at least) and extremely detailed. I liked how you said everything and... ...

Hello, HayleyEllison! Artemis here for a little review! How ya' doin'? :D Okay, let's start. First off, your time. There's a little issue with that. It seems you used an ...

Hmmm... Nice poem you've got there, ChocolateCello! I really like how you're saying that although you like this person, he/she is not all you think about. Of course, with Percy ...

Hey, Will! Artemis here for a short review. Well, nice parody you've got here, eh? I think it's pretty good. I sang it to myself and most of it fit; ...

Hey, Annie! Artemis here to review! Okay, first off. "Np" is supposed to be "no". And, whenever you use quotation marks, capitalize the word after it. Also, the last word ...

Hello, Jello! Hey, that rhymed. :D Well, hey anyway! (Rhyming again. O.o) Okay, I honestly have nothing to say about this. I don't think I like it very much. It's ...

Hello, Cleverclogs! Artemis here to review! So, first off, a little nitpick with word choice her. Instead of "a", I think "the" would be better... I just think it sounds ...

Hello, Meandbooks! Artemis here to review! :D So lets begin. In the second stanza, you talk about your parka and shirts or whatever you're wearing. Then you say that you're ...

Hello, fortis! Nice work you've got there! And a perfect memorial poem for 9/11. :) Let's jump in! Ah, well, let's see... This line right here is really descriptive and ...

Hello Sothisonekidwrites! I'm Artemis and I'm here for a review! First off, the giant list in the second paragraph is waaaay to long. Cut back on the examples! Maybe you ...

Hey, EfflorescentSmile! Artemis here. I told you I would check this out, remember? :D Let's dive in. First off, the first sentence needs some work. The amount of hyphens and ...

Heya, LadySpark. Artemis here! :D This is too amazing for words. The way you order every sentence, how you write and how your style fits you perfectly...well, all I can ...

Hey, tigeraye! Nice work you've got there. The title drew my eye to it pretty well. :D Kudos for that. Okay, let's dive in! First off, I was a little ...