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"Why go home When home never meant much" I love this opening is fantastic it lets me know home isn't safe for this person and I've felt the same. I ...

hey there a random person leaving a review ;) first of all i loved how it sounded, it sounded so deep so emotional. You delved in perfectly with what this ...

Hey there I just wanted to leave a review :) you did an amazing job. "I love someone who forgot how to love From hurt and tribulations, they've guarded their ...

hey there i'm here to leave a quick review :) I'm going line by line "When pigs fly In the bright blue sky" I love the alliteration here, the way ...

"It is the language that the blind can see and the deaf can feel." I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS! "they give a voice to those who don’t have one; they pull ...

"Those who fear the ocean are wise to do so, For it is a vast and unforgiving entity. Those who sail the seas know to respect it, As they realize ...

"So now appreciate the cold wind against your skin It is all that will ever touch you without feeling like a sin" I love the wording here, it literally sounds ...

"We didn’t really notice how scarred we were, Even at so young an age you constantly had others on your mind, Not a single selfish thought was present to prove ...

"I have a washing machine inside of my stomach" i love the way that you made this sound, while also being 100 percent relatable. "My face got ignited It’s burning ...

"Like impatient children, we ripped off the wrappings around our gifts and reveled in their beauty." i loved the language here! Great job, that's exactly what this feels like. “The ...