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Emotional... sad... Uncomplicated wording yet it added to the tone. I liked this.

How very, awesomely you... Compliments from below.

Hehe... It was cute, yet a bit freaky. It kind of reminds me of a cult...

The last sentence of each stanza bothered me amd the second to the last stanza was sort of irritating. It's mostly just flow and wording that I didn't really like ...

It was a bit choppy and there were some funny sentences to fit the rhythm/rhyme of it. Despite that, it was all right. I think it could be a little ...

Cool... I liked it. I liked the tone of it and the flow... Very lyrical.

[Welcome to YWS by the way.] Wow... This was very beautiful. I liked the metaphors a lot. You can really describe things elegantly. This flowed so well, too, like a ...

I didn't really care much for the second to the last stanza, but the rest of it was very 'Oh my god... that was awesome'.

Is unmissable a word? Heh, it kind of distracted me because I was wondering if it was or not. Anyway... I liked it. It was really... cool... Couldn't really find ...

There's something about it that bothered me... not quite sure what. Watching the graceful clouds fleeting elegantly past. This line in particular... I don't know... I didn't really like it.

What was the 'pre' supposed to do? Just wondering... I liked it. It's one of those things that made me think, 'Oh, I get it!' at the end. Sweet, light, ...

Very romantic... overly romantic? Ah, well... it's how you feel. *shrug*

I guess it's cute. I didn't really find much with it.

There is emotion, but it's not really portrayed in the words. I mean, it is, but the words used could be less... cliche? The first stanza was all right, but ...

It was pretty good, except this line: ding dong ding dong surprise. It's a powerful line, but the lack of commas could make one read right through it... I think ...