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Hello! I'm no romantic...not in the least, but, I liked this. It's got a good flow, which is always good, and your word choic is also quite nice. So, I'm ...

WOW! Ok that was pretty cool. I could see those becoming like, twisted fairy tale movies. They're really interesting. I guess for "NitPicks" I'll do them one poem at a ...

Hello! I really liked this poem. The rhyming and flow were very nice. It was sad but emotion is what makes for a good poem, no? A few very small ...

Hello Kiddo! This poem is another good one. I like how its straight foreward without many metaphors. As much as I love metaphors sometimes a break is needed. Time for ...

Aiight kiddo, here goes it. Over all I liked the rhythm, it was smooth and even and it read well. It was a good poem in general. This brings me ...

Hello! I love lyrics and I am happy to review them. This is a neeat song. Very straight forward and clean. Not clogged with metaphors. I like that. Nitpicks: 1. ...

Hello! I'm Moti, I'll be your reviewer today. First things first, I like it. Very emotional and it tells the whole story but is still short and sweet and to ...

Hello! I like this poem. It's simple and straight forward. Nitpicks: 1. Punctuation! Add some punctuation to add to the flow of the poem. 2. I have to agree with ...

I completely disagree with Tgirly. I understand what you're saying. The peach is singular, lonely and has what it needs already given to it. The pear has to work to ...

Hey-o. I like this poem, it shows how deep feelings go and how they effect us. Nitpicks: 1. You have no capitols. A capitol letter should go at the beginning ...

Hello. First off,I Really like this poem. The emotion is clearly conveyed but at the same time lets the readers mind wander to their own feelings. Nitpicks: 1. Punctuation! You ...

I Like this story. As sad as it is, it shows how easy it is to look from a different perspective and see how out culture differs from others. Even ...

Hello!I'm not exactly sure how to review a review but i'll try. I've never seen this movie so I like that you described in detail without giving too much away. ...

Hello, I'm Moti. I liked this, you did an excelent job conveying emotion and thought without direct thoughts from the father. Nitpicks: 1. Words like zenith and occidental, I don't ...

Hey,I'm Moti,i'll be your reviewer today.Over all I liked it. Discussions are something I don't see a lot on here and I admire your individuality. Nit Picks: 1. Mr.Friere says ...