emmylou1995

I like this. The way you worded it was nice. As someone said before me, the ye's were confusing at first, but then I realized it was old english. I ...

Actually, this is an excerpt from my thirteen chapter novel that is not posted here on YWS because I cannot figure out its name yet.

Thank you so much! This being is not a human, it is an elf. This peice is actually in one of my books, but I wanted to see if other ...

Thanks everyone! I actually wrote this poem after listening to the song The Only Exception, by Paramore. I loved the song so much that I used its lyrics ideas to ...

Thanks. I really worked hard on this. I added some more about the mans wife, I hope the story is better now.

Thnks, kingolions. It was for the superheroes contest. The point was to have an original idea and write a short story. Well, i wanted mine to be funny.

Thanks! This is actually for a contest, but i thought it was a great idea. I mean, Superman wears tights, right? Why not add a tutu?

Thanks! By the way, the italics on this website for some reason do not work on my computer. So, her thoughts are actually in italics, it just does not show.

Sorry, the h was a typo. I'll fix it.

Thanks, Everyone!

Thanks RK! I love that sentance too. I am changing it all to present tense, with a little help.

Thanks!

Good. I like your poem alot more now. Great job with the descriptions. I would suggest, in stanza two, to change it a little. You have black in it twice ...

I loved this! It really doesn't describe anything, and yet I am dying to know more. It would be a great prologue! PM me if you write any more!

Thanks, flower-child! I love writing poems. I am thinking of posting another one soon, so be on the lookout!