emmylou1995

This was just beautiful! I'm sorry if you are actually going through that, and the only thing I thjought about the whole time was the movie My Sister's Keeper. But ...

Amazing poem. I almost cried at the stanza where we find out that he died. Thats so sad.

This was totally awesome! I liked how all the sentances flowed together.

Oh my god! A D&D sword fight, epic! I absolutely loved this soooooo much!!!!!!

Thanks guys! I will definatly work on this and hopefully post a updated version of it sometime in the near future!

This was really fun to read and kinda sad. I like it. *She grins*

This was absolutley amazing! Just phenomenal. There is no other way to describe this! Very new ideas on this story and just amazing imagery. You are seriously talented.

I liked this poem, even though I didn't really know what was going on. Add more, a lot more and it could turn out really good. It can be way ...

this was an absolutley amazing piece. so much emotion and sadness and pain. you really made the reader feel for the main character. such a sad story, and such good ...

I liked this poem. I agree that this could be the basis for a better and more deep poem. The idea and theme is good. Add more imagery, less...I don't ...

Thanks everyone! Yes, this really is about a boulder. It was fun and kind of hard to write. I'm glad you guys like it.

This was brilliant. Simply genius.

Oh my gosh. Wow. This is absolutley heartbreaking. I love this so much. Thank you for writing this, I really needed to hear those words.

Well Cspr, again I will explain my story. At this point, I wanted Nayima to be a little....um, too independant and liking herslef too much. later in the story I ...

Well, Cspr, here is what I have to say. First of all, I know what you mean about the time lapse and I think I fixed that in the paragraph ...