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Vibe First off, interesting topic you have here. I don't think I've ever read a poem about senses. The good things can go first. Like I said, interesting and unique ...

musicandme I thought your topic was really interesting and rare. The fact that we meet strangers everyday but you don't really think about it that much. But then the fact ...

musicandme First off this was amazing. The picture and format itself was great. I felt like the picture you chose fit in well with the dead love theme. And the ...

Eveningstar I think your format fits well with this poem. It makes it look like a professional piece. You did a good job with punctuation and gramar. Though some of ...

godlypop I was watching silence of the lamb right as I was reading this. Creepiest thing was right when I finished reading this I heard from the T.V. "ello clarise" ...

Hadj This is very deep. The last stanza was a very powerful ending. I am interested in the way you formated your poem. The way that there's a period after ...

Birkhoff That was epic lol. I love how at the end you included - Tobey Maguire (the real Spiderman) That was probably one of my favorite things from this poem. ...

emeraldfox I find it enjoyable how the only known trait of the girl is the purple skittles. Thus the title. I also think it's neat that this is inspired by ...

Lashes Short yet great. I havn't seem a poem or story that was formated like this;I also hav't seen any poem or story that had an attached picture luke this. ...

suicide99 Well, that was disturbing. I got a bit confused about half way into the poem with what was going on. Was it herself that was telling her all those ...

Collideascope I loved this. It successfully creeped me; enough so that I looked over at my wall full of photographs and though, "Well, I wish I could cover those up ...

Wow, just wow. That was very dramatic. In a good, hooking way of course. There was the word "aurora" in an early paragraph. Was it supposed to be "aroma". She ...

TiffanyToy, The best kind of poems are the ones where the author pours their heart and feelings into them. This poem shows just that. I can tell what your feelings ...

I must say that that was really well done. I'm new to this site and your poem was the first thing that I've read from here. Compared to people that ...