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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Romantic
    Re: Trainees Take on the Apocalypse Prologue

    Hiya, I thought I'd stop in for a quick review! I love the intensity and the slightly cold open with limited context. I also really appreciated the character descriptions which ...

    Jun 10, 2024

  • Other » General, General
    Re: When you bake a cookie

    Hiya! I'm here for a quick review! First off, I find the style of this poem to be so, so, charming and enjoyable to read. It has a fast and ...

    Jun 10, 2024


  • Hiya! I'm here for a quick review of this wonderful work! As a lover of creative literary structure, I think this is a really cool idea which I thoroughly enjoyed ...

    Jun 10, 2024

  • Poetry » Horror, Literature
    Re: The Cause

    Hello, I guess this is technically a review, but it's probably not going to be a typical one, as this isn't a "typical" poem. I first want to say I ...

    Feb 15, 2023

  • Short Story » General, Dramatic
    Re: Egg - 1500 words

    I... love this!? Don't take my punctuation as an offense at all. This piece reminds me of a surrealist painting. It's slightly bizarre and absurd, but it makes you want ...

    Feb 10, 2023


  • Hiya!!! I'm not 100% whether you meant this as a joke, but let me tell you, I hope it is not. I really loved this poem. It's simple and domestic ...

    Feb 7, 2023

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical
    Re: Home ¿

    Hello! I'm here to leave a quick-ish review!! First of all, I love your concept. I think home is a complex and personal topic that really intrigues me. I also ...

    Feb 4, 2023

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General
    Re: I was Late to Work Today

    Hello, this is just a short and positive review that fits the poem to a tea. First off I love how short and sweet this poem is. Also even though ...

    Feb 28, 2022

  • Other » Fantasy, Other
    Re: 25 cheerful Christmas tales

    Hello: I am going to leave a review but as there are so many stories its gonna be a bit more general. I skimmed some and read others so here ...

    Feb 27, 2022

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: Midas

    Hello!! I'm here to leave a review. I would like to start by complimenting the talent you displayed in writing this poem. You might notice most of this review is ...

    Feb 27, 2022

  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic
    Re: Tux

    Hello, I’m here to give a quick review, but first I must sing your praises. You wanted help fixing this story but I honestly love it. The repetition of “vodka ...

    Feb 26, 2022

  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: Do You Remember?

    Hey, here to review if you don't mind! I really like this. It's short and sweet and gets the message across really well. One thing is you capitalized the beginning ...

    Jun 3, 2021

  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Revenge

    Hey, I'm here to review if you don't mind!! First off love the story. It's super captivating and I like the perspective. I could have done with a bit more ...

    Jun 2, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: intrusive thoughts

    This is incredible so I'm leaving a review. As I said, incredible. It's chaos in the BEST way. The type of chaos that makes your head spin, but you don't ...

    Jun 2, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: I choose to smile

    Hey, I'm here to review!! I am happy to help since I have the same problem. :) First off, I really liked this and I think you did a really ...

    Jun 2, 2021


Owning our story can be hard but not nearly as difficult as spending our lives running from it. Embracing our vulnerabilities is risky but not nearly as dangerous as giving up on love and belonging and joy—the experiences that make us the most vulnerable. Only when we are brave enough to explore the darkness will we discover the infinite power of our light.
— Brené Brown