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Re: A Thousand Small Hands, A Thousand Brave Dreams
Hi Nethmi! I'm here for a quick review! First off, this is a really lovely poem. The emphasis on unity and common experiences, both of pain and hope are really ...
Jul 6, 2025 -
Re: Heaven and Hell is pretty cringe, actually: Part One
Hi vampricone6783! I LOVE THIS SO SO MUCH!! It's just unhinged enough and almost reminds me of the writing style of Terry Pratchett in the Tiffany Aching books. So the ...
Jul 5, 2025 -
Re: MOTP: Minimum Wage
Hi Zook13! I'm here for a quick review! To start off, I really like your general format for the story and it reminds me of some sort of testimony or ...
Jul 5, 2025 -
Re: Trainees Take on the Apocalypse Prologue
Hiya, I thought I'd stop in for a quick review! I love the intensity and the slightly cold open with limited context. I also really appreciated the character descriptions which ...
Jun 10, 2024 -
Re: When you bake a cookie
Hiya! I'm here for a quick review! First off, I find the style of this poem to be so, so, charming and enjoyable to read. It has a fast and ...
Jun 10, 2024 -
Re: Practice List of intEresting AnimalS of notE
Hiya! I'm here for a quick review of this wonderful work! As a lover of creative literary structure, I think this is a really cool idea which I thoroughly enjoyed ...
Jun 10, 2024 -
Re: The Cause
Hello, I guess this is technically a review, but it's probably not going to be a typical one, as this isn't a "typical" poem. I first want to say I ...
Feb 15, 2023 -
Re: Egg - 1500 words
I... love this!? Don't take my punctuation as an offense at all. This piece reminds me of a surrealist painting. It's slightly bizarre and absurd, but it makes you want ...
Feb 10, 2023 -
Re: POV You Are A Chicken Who Just Made It Back From Town
Hiya!!! I'm not 100% whether you meant this as a joke, but let me tell you, I hope it is not. I really loved this poem. It's simple and domestic ...
Feb 7, 2023 -
Re: Home ¿
Hello! I'm here to leave a quick-ish review!! First of all, I love your concept. I think home is a complex and personal topic that really intrigues me. I also ...
Feb 4, 2023 -
Re: I was Late to Work Today
Hello, this is just a short and positive review that fits the poem to a tea. First off I love how short and sweet this poem is. Also even though ...
Feb 28, 2022 -
Re: 25 cheerful Christmas tales
Hello: I am going to leave a review but as there are so many stories its gonna be a bit more general. I skimmed some and read others so here ...
Feb 27, 2022 -
Re: Midas
Hello!! I'm here to leave a review. I would like to start by complimenting the talent you displayed in writing this poem. You might notice most of this review is ...
Feb 27, 2022 -
Re: Tux
Hello, I’m here to give a quick review, but first I must sing your praises. You wanted help fixing this story but I honestly love it. The repetition of “vodka ...
Feb 26, 2022 -
Re: Do You Remember?
Hey, here to review if you don't mind! I really like this. It's short and sweet and gets the message across really well. One thing is you capitalized the beginning ...
Jun 3, 2021
