emilia9ludenberg

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So sorry I am late to respond to this message; I just wanted to say thank you so much for your feedback. This has been instrumental to my writing and ...

Thanks for your review; I like your idea of splitting the first paragraph up into two; i think it places much-needed emphasis on this line.

So glad you enjoyed it :)

God I love this! Very relatable, and the rhyming scheme is impeccable. My favourite line would have to be 'Love's particular passionate hue' and the last line too. Tell me; ...

Hey Imp, I've gone through. my work and made the necessary adjustments that you mentioned in your review. It was very specific and detailed, so thank you so much; I'm ...

No worries :) looking forward to it

Neat Swift reference, and I like the alcohol imagery, though I can't quite understand what you were trying to say. I appreciate that, since generally people write either too simplistic ...

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Hello! Here to leave a short review. I quite enjoy this actually, especially the last few lines- it creates an intimate, nostalgic feel which adds a layer of personal experiences ...

Oh yeah fair enough, that is true, I do prefer longer reviews but I don't mind short ones either

Thanks for your review, glad you enjoyed it! Also, what do you mean by unfortunately? Hehe %uD83D%uDE2D

This is so cute! I love the simplicity of this, yet it still reveals a beautiful, thought-provoking message- very refreshing, and this genuinely helps me to realise how my writing ...

Hello, thanks for your review! Yeah this wasn't really one of my best works, to be honest. It does need improvement- so thank you for the suggestions! :) Also, the ...

Well I say entirely, but not really- I have mainly spilt it up into a collection of poems, with a bit more imagery and a sort of plot that echoes ...

Aw thank you so much! Personally I didn't think this made a load of sense, but I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it and found your interpretation very intriguing. I ...